2017 writing goal Reflection

My writing goal is to revise and edit my writing. I think I have proved that I can do that in my speech about BAD FOOD.

The strategy that  helped me where word hippo to find better words, I also reread my speech thousands of times bye myself and to a buddy, I pick up some things that I could have changed and  fond better words. I said My speech to lots of diffident people and I got lot of good feed back and I could see what they were pointing out and then  I changed it. 

I used to just write and then I thought that I was done, put now I know that once you've finished your draft then you have to reread it many time to make sore that it makes since and edit it so that you have no spelling mistakes.  

speech Refltion

This week Wednesday I said my speech in front of Mrs price and Mrs Akkermen, as well as quite a few students.
My speech was about Bad food, in it it had facts about fast food, like that an avenge kid consumes about 3 kg fat a year just from dinning at fast food resonant. It Was also about trans fat you've probably never heard of it but it a fat that can kill you, trans fat can also give you heart Disease, censer, Diabetes, obesity and liver dysfunction. My speech was also about sugar and that New Zealand is consuming 76,348,761 teaspoons of sugar a day because An average New Zealand consumes about 16 teaspoons a day so I times that by the population in New Zealand. My speech is also about  Avocados  and blueberries being good for you bran. I think that I delivered My speech well.

STEM week 3

On Monday Stella and I did STEM together. We did beige building, it was so fun Mrs would did it with us.
first we got into groups of 4 Stella and I went with Layla and Hannah. I went up to get the strews and tape, us soon as i got to the with the stuff we quickly planed and just got into it. 

our beige was the best, it held the most counters and was the best starker. In the end we were all winners, but in my head I new ours was the best.

Student Led Conference

I found it to be very informative and was great to see what Renee has been doing in class. Loving to hear her goals and see what she has achieved so far this year with the support of fantastic role models, her teachers are!