2017 writing goal Reflection

My writing goal is to revise and edit my writing. I think I have proved that I can do that in my speech about BAD FOOD.

The strategy that  helped me where word hippo to find better words, I also reread my speech thousands of times bye myself and to a buddy, I pick up some things that I could have changed and  fond better words. I said My speech to lots of diffident people and I got lot of good feed back and I could see what they were pointing out and then  I changed it. 

I used to just write and then I thought that I was done, put now I know that once you've finished your draft then you have to reread it many time to make sore that it makes since and edit it so that you have no spelling mistakes.