Week 9 reelection

This week Karaka my literacy group got set up on descriptive  writing. 
First we looked into the diffident language features, then got given a writing model and we had to find the personification in the poem, personification is when you descriptive a none living thing with something that a living thing can do like, the snake smiled in victory. We also use more language features like alliteration, onomatopoeia and emotive language. I feel I'm better a descriptive writing, and I have learnt and I will not forget when and were I should put language features.